The hunter

In Te Ngahere we have been writing. In writing last week we
had to set ourselves a goal on what we were focusing on.
My goal was to choose words and phrases to enhance
meaning and/or mood most of the time. I think I did good
at it because I added words like Rumble, rumble, rumble,
my stomach screams for food. We had choices of what we
wanted to write about. Our choices were three videos.
One of the videos was called the dragon slayer, the others
were called Hunted and Pigeon Impossible. I chose to write
about Hunted, Hunted is about a little boy who is hungry
and really needs food.
 Here is my writing for you to enjoy.

The Hunter

Rumble, rumble, rumble, my stomach screams for food. Alone in the jungle, scanning for food,
I can’t remember the last time I ate.  All of a sudden I catch the aroma of delicious roast meat.
Like a dog I follow the sent. Climbing over obstacles on my way. 

I finally get there, my face gleams up in excitement ready to eat. Well I carefully tiptoe to the chicken,
I feel thrilled to reach out to it.

When I am reaching out to it, all of a sudden.. SLIP BANG!! In to a hole, all I see is darkness,
I set there terrified.

Looking around, I see a shadow, suddenly I hear a click, then a spark goes towards my eyes,
going blind for a few seconds realised I was upside down.