poem's

In Te Ngahere we have been learning to use metaphors in our writing. Then we wrote metaphors about ourselves  we weren't allowed to add I or because . I think I could do better at putting good metaphors in my poem. I enjoyed describe my self. This is my first draft .

Mihipeka is a putakawa ,beautiful and bold.

Mihipeka is lots  of lollies, sweet and sour.

Mihipeka is eggs on toast, warm and slobby.

Mihipeka is a diamond, bright and big.

Mihipeka is rainbows end, going up and down around a round.