poem's

In Te Ngahere we have been learning to use metaphors in our writing. Then we wrote metaphors about ourselves  we weren't allowed to add I or because . I think I could do better at putting good metaphors in my poem. I enjoyed describe my self. This is my first draft .

Mihipeka is a putakawa ,beautiful and bold.

Mihipeka is lots  of lollies, sweet and sour.

Mihipeka is eggs on toast, warm and slobby.

Mihipeka is a diamond, bright and big.

Mihipeka is rainbows end, going up and down around a round.

My Pepeha

In the last few weeks Te Ngahere we have been learning to say our pepeha. We also had to make a
visual pepeha. So I made a powtoon. A pepeha is saying who you are and where you come from,
We also had to add our whanau in our pepeha. I think I did a good job at pronouncing my pepeha.
The thing that I found most challenging is making the powtoon because I always forget to save it.
Hope you guys like my powtoon.